Back by popular demand!
"It took almost fifteen minutes to shove the dead weight into the Seville’s trunk."
There is no way this is going to end well for Myra. Still surprised. Well done!
Part two was fun to write but I won’t give any spoilers.
Oh dear!
I do trust the Leaper wasn't damaged.
So far, this is a great read! Jack, as someone who doesn't put a book I start reading down, waiting a week sucks! You turning into the Amazon Prime for SubStack??
Enjoyed this, and read your first two submissions for the first time too. Can’t wait for the second half!
Thank you for immersing yourself in my little noir world. Hope you enjoy part two. Oh, and make sure you read the Garland Fiske story as well.
Nice work!
This is very enjoyable. Set in reality, with unexpected twists as it turns darker. It really kept me interested in every word.
I like yellow cars, and you can't beat a large trunk to help deal with life's surprises.
I wanted to write a story where, what can go wrong, will go wrong.
Bravo ! .
This could be another story of broken glass and broken dreams .
-Nate
>gets shot with a weak ass nambu
>lives
serves her right for not packing a fuddy five and knocking the soul out of his body
"what, was he? Mexican? black?"
based
"Back in the old days, before they finished the 101, you would get a hit from the bottle in the detective’s desk and a commendation."
i like bill.
"It took almost fifteen minutes to shove the dead weight into the Seville’s trunk."
There is no way this is going to end well for Myra. Still surprised. Well done!
Part two was fun to write but I won’t give any spoilers.
Oh dear!
I do trust the Leaper wasn't damaged.
So far, this is a great read! Jack, as someone who doesn't put a book I start reading down, waiting a week sucks! You turning into the Amazon Prime for SubStack??
Enjoyed this, and read your first two submissions for the first time too. Can’t wait for the second half!
Thank you for immersing yourself in my little noir world. Hope you enjoy part two. Oh, and make sure you read the Garland Fiske story as well.
Nice work!
This is very enjoyable. Set in reality, with unexpected twists as it turns darker. It really kept me interested in every word.
I like yellow cars, and you can't beat a large trunk to help deal with life's surprises.
I wanted to write a story where, what can go wrong, will go wrong.
Bravo ! .
This could be another story of broken glass and broken dreams .
-Nate
>gets shot with a weak ass nambu
>lives
serves her right for not packing a fuddy five and knocking the soul out of his body
"what, was he? Mexican? black?"
based
"Back in the old days, before they finished the 101, you would get a hit from the bottle in the detective’s desk and a commendation."
i like bill.